week 111 ~ a woman in the sun
she got up from the bed and stood
a woman in the sun looking
out her window contemplating
day and the world beyond she could
see it although she knew she would
not walk out her door no not yet
the brilliance still did not offset
her fear though it was beautiful
and full of life she felt the pull
of places she can not forget
she looks back once memorizing
the long pathway that got her here
the things she’ll miss she can see clear-
ly but tomorrow is waiting
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December 2, 2010 at 12:13 pm
Lovely poem, Marilyn. Beautiful family photo, too! Thank you for sharing…
Carol Ann Hoel
December 2, 2010 at 12:25 pm
Glad to– thanks as always for reading.
mairmusic
December 2, 2010 at 2:37 pm
cheerful…
skillful writing…
the ending is optimism…
Thanks for the contribution to poets rally.
have fun!
Jingle
December 2, 2010 at 12:57 pm
thanks Ji– you too!
mairmusic
December 2, 2010 at 2:37 pm
yes, tomorrow is waiting… nice to read you from Jingle. here is mine:
http://rrel.wordpress.com/2010/11/26/different-forms-as-treasures/
robin ellen lucas
December 2, 2010 at 12:59 pm
it is, for better or…
mairmusic
December 2, 2010 at 2:38 pm
Such a beautiful sentiment in the poem…it has such a warm tone to it.
slpmartin
December 2, 2010 at 6:14 pm
Thanks– it’s one of the last set in my decima series
mairmusic
December 2, 2010 at 7:08 pm
Form follows function and all play merrily together here. I like the picture of the woman at the window–very real.
hedgewitch
December 2, 2010 at 7:56 pm
Thanks– the title is also the title of a painting by Edward Hopper.
mairmusic
December 2, 2010 at 8:04 pm
Tomorrow is waiting–what an excellent ending to a soulful poem.
heather grace stewart
December 2, 2010 at 9:44 pm
Ah, thanks for reading!
mairmusic
December 3, 2010 at 11:10 pm
just adored it, read a similar poem in charles’s blog, now in yours, and you will see one in mine very soon.
i wrote it couple of days ago after reading a sad poem in william’s blog.
trisha
December 3, 2010 at 11:21 am
Thanks, Trisha– I need to get out and read soon, but catching up w/ my lost work is killing my time! So glad I made it through NaNo before this happened. Wish it could have happened after the semester was over…
mairmusic
December 3, 2010 at 11:10 pm
Yours is a nice blog.. and this one is a wonderful piece of poetry..
Regards~ Sayandeep
Sayandeep Kundu
December 3, 2010 at 3:14 pm
Thanks for reading!
mairmusic
December 3, 2010 at 11:08 pm
I like this. Reminds me of my own reigned in adventurous spirit.
somewhere else
December 3, 2010 at 10:50 pm
Thanks, and she will follow her adventures, soon.
mairmusic
December 3, 2010 at 11:08 pm
Wonderful write.
dasuntoucha
December 4, 2010 at 3:13 pm
Ah, thanks!
mairmusic
December 4, 2010 at 6:57 pm
This reminds me of the infinite amount of choices we have everyday that we wake up. We choose our destiny every sunrise.
Thank you!
http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2010/12/03/7sins/
Happy Rally!
Marlee-I Mystic
December 4, 2010 at 5:58 pm
Yes we do– thanks for reading.
mairmusic
December 4, 2010 at 6:58 pm
Savings moments that most take for granted is a wonderful gift.
booguloo
December 5, 2010 at 1:45 am
a lovely thought!
mairmusic
December 5, 2010 at 11:16 am
great poem…beautiful family photo:)
hoiden
December 6, 2010 at 12:37 am
Today is here and tomorrow is waiting. All is well.
Fine photo of family. Nice!
Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved
December 6, 2010 at 6:08 pm
Thanks– the 4 generations!
mairmusic
December 7, 2010 at 12:16 am
beautiful :)
and a lovely family pic there :)
M here from Jingle’s Rally
megzone
December 8, 2010 at 6:20 am