Celebrating a Year

week 130 ~ this is carnaval

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this is carnaval
twirl around laugh don’t
let the curtain fall
the night can’t end won’t

twirl around laugh don’t
sleep there’s no time now
the night can’t end won’t
we’ll dance through somehow

sleep there’s no time now
the music lifts me
we’ll dance through somehow
exhausted happy

the music lifts me
when it’s over then
exhausted happy
we’ll sing like madmen

when it’s over then
hold the memories
we’ll sing like madmen
any way you please

hold the memories
let the curtain fall
any way you please
this is carnaval

Written by mairmusic

April 7, 2011 at 12:25 am

Posted in April, pantoum

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  1. Hold the memories – indeed. Very nice!

    Becca Givens

    April 7, 2011 at 12:38 am

  2. what a joy it is to spend time like that. :)
    dancing till you drop.

    trisha

    April 7, 2011 at 7:34 am

  3. Such a day will make you relaxed….dancing till you drop …wonderful

    Rashmi

    April 7, 2011 at 9:09 am

  4. fun times! always one of the best memories :)

    bendedspoon

    April 7, 2011 at 9:50 am

  5. wow! love your wordplay! my thursday~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/let-it-be-it/

    fiveloaf

    April 7, 2011 at 11:12 am

  6. Some memories are meant to hold onto for a lifetime.

    slpmartin

    April 7, 2011 at 12:19 pm

  7. Made me smile!
    A very beautiful life- song I call these.. :)

    Reading your words was as wonderful as enjoying in Carnival!

    Hugs x

    Olivia

    April 7, 2011 at 2:44 pm

  8. This sounds like a call to a Bacchanal :)
    Totally enjoyable

    Life: Between the lines

    April 7, 2011 at 3:49 pm

  9. A nice, happy poem… Very Rio!

    seabell

    April 7, 2011 at 7:25 pm

  10. Lovely poem, love the way it flows so smoothly. Dancing, having fun!

    deadpoet88

    April 7, 2011 at 11:41 pm

  11. Memories of carnival, music, and singing. All good. Nice pantoum.

    Thanks for your heads-up on blog issue. I am setting up a different site and hope to resolve.

    Read your bro’s NaNo book. Really engaging. Enjoyed!

    Jamie Dedes

    April 8, 2011 at 12:35 am

    • You’re welcome! My brother told me– he was so pleased. His book is “all your fault” you know, as you got us both into NaNo ;-)

      mairmusic

      April 8, 2011 at 10:27 pm

  12. yeah hold the memories… and let those moments keep playing in our minds :)
    lovely write.

    Rajlakshmi

    April 8, 2011 at 2:41 pm

  13. Great pantoum!

    lizbethsgarden

    April 8, 2011 at 4:54 pm

  14. The craziness associated with happiness and the nostalgia that seeps in even int hose mad moments.. that is what makes life a unique experience indeed!
    Thanks for sharing this amazing one. :)
    I am from ~
    http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2011/04/02/the-alliterated-odes-the-alliterated-symphonies-of-the-mind/

    Purvi

    April 10, 2011 at 4:44 am

  15. cool…good work. And a mandolinist to boot…impressive.

    Jesse S. Mitchell

    April 10, 2011 at 11:36 am

  16. oh wow, what an emazing poem! love it :) the vivacity of life shing through. car-na-val :D xx

  17. Makes me want to dance in this early morning.

    Stephen

    April 11, 2011 at 7:08 am

  18. oh your words do a dance of their own, Marilynn! :) and yet another fantastic pantoum. I’d move to that music I think, it’d be like an involuntary reaction :D

    Rally Week 41 – My Poetry

    Vinay

    April 11, 2011 at 11:15 am

  19. How well I know “exhausted happy”. Good times, great job.

    torquethis

    April 11, 2011 at 8:03 pm

  20. It’s so playful, it automatically lifted my spirits after reading…..I just want to dance now =)

    scarlettlove4

    April 13, 2011 at 3:20 pm

  21. I learned about Pantoum from Poetic Asides with Robert Brewer but I am not good at them. This is a great poem.
    Iris

    irisdeurmyer

    April 13, 2011 at 11:11 pm


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