Celebrating a Year

week 311 ~ sometimes I wonder

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me.311sometimes I wonder
if I stop fighting
will I go under

dreams rent asunder
wildfires igniting
sometimes I wonder

is strength a blunder
false landfall sighting
will I go under

does distant thunder
shadow false lightning
sometimes I wonder

what is this hunger
for truth inciting
will I go under

all said and done sir
past sins alighting
sometimes I wonder
will I go under

Written by mairmusic

September 26, 2014 at 2:30 pm

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  1. Cool! I enjoyed your writing! Keep it going!
    check out:

    Elan Mudrow

    September 26, 2014 at 2:33 pm

  2. The poem made me think of a Paul Simon song…enjoyed the verse.


    September 26, 2014 at 4:31 pm

  3. Sometimes I wonder too! Nicely done, Marilynn.

    Jamie Dedes

    September 26, 2014 at 11:36 pm

  4. i too sometimes ponder over those issues then feel that its better to stand tall than crawl.

    sharmishtha basu

    September 28, 2014 at 3:55 am

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