week 311 ~ sometimes I wonder
sometimes I wonder
if I stop fighting
will I go under
dreams rent asunder
wildfires igniting
sometimes I wonder
is strength a blunder
false landfall sighting
will I go under
does distant thunder
shadow false lightning
sometimes I wonder
what is this hunger
for truth inciting
will I go under
all said and done sir
past sins alighting
sometimes I wonder
will I go under
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Elan Mudrow
September 26, 2014 at 2:33 pm
Thanks for your comment!
mairmusic
September 26, 2014 at 2:50 pm
The poem made me think of a Paul Simon song…enjoyed the verse.
slpmartin
September 26, 2014 at 4:31 pm
Thanks– glad!
mairmusic
September 26, 2014 at 4:48 pm
Sometimes I wonder too! Nicely done, Marilynn.
Jamie Dedes
September 26, 2014 at 11:36 pm
thanks. But we are the sort who have to carry on.
mairmusic
October 22, 2014 at 8:30 pm
i too sometimes ponder over those issues then feel that its better to stand tall than crawl.
sharmishtha basu
September 28, 2014 at 3:55 am
V.true.
mairmusic
October 22, 2014 at 8:28 pm