Celebrating a Year

week 282 ~ don’t walk through the door

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me.283don’t walk through the door
not yet stay awhile
I’m not asking more

than this moment for
our dreams to beguile
don’t walk through the door

we’ve worlds to explore
wrapped up in a smile
I’m not asking more

tomorrow could soar
past trouble with style
don’t walk through the door

there’s no keeping score
when love is worthwhile
I’m not asking more

just hear me before
today turns the dial
don’t walk through the door
I’m not asking more

Written by mairmusic

March 9, 2014 at 6:48 pm

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  1. Interesting verse…the choice of ‘through’ instead of ‘out’…makes one consider more carefully the text.


    March 9, 2014 at 11:54 pm

    • Thanks– I spent some time working on the exact wording in this so as not to play to stereotypes. Through is not out; more is not a promise.


      March 19, 2014 at 11:40 am

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