Celebrating a Year

week 239 ~ time dissolving slowly

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time dissolving slowly
stalls as the light should change
even then we can’t see
time dissolving slowly
sorted by memory
lost pieces rearrange
time dissolving slowly
stalls as the light should change

Written by mairmusic

May 9, 2013 at 7:39 pm

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  1. amazing!

    Sharmishtha Basu

    May 10, 2013 at 2:26 am

  2. The passage of time does seem to happen without our awareness it seems…enjoyed the poem.


    May 11, 2013 at 1:10 am

  3. Back to make sure I didn’t miss any posts and to reread your poems. I’ve been doing fly-bys. So much going on.

    I love this and the perfect photograph to go with it. Your poem does make it feel like time passes slowing and maybe because we are so unconscious (not mindful?) most of the time. A lovely piece …

    Jamie Dedes

    May 12, 2013 at 1:40 am

    • I was thinking too about faulty memories, and the inability to form memories in the elderly, like my Mom, but the pleasure of being there just the same.


      May 13, 2013 at 3:22 pm

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