Celebrating a Year

week 238 ~ if somehow there can be a choice

with 4 comments


if somehow there can be a choice
let me know now as I plan my
escape falling from grace will I
ever find reason to rejoice
recognizing my inner voice
in the things I cannot control
as they blossom and become whole
in an instant without knowing
where they’ll go fervently hoping
the real dream isn’t one I stole

Written by mairmusic

May 3, 2013 at 4:49 pm

Posted in decima, May

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  1. I rather like this poem…has me pondering what you Muse used to inspire it.


    May 3, 2013 at 5:05 pm

    • i’ll ask her when I see her. I wrote the first draft nearly in my sleep and spent a week trying to nudge it toward a narrative, only to backtrack each time to the first draft. This is a slight alteration, once I realized I had to keep the first line and the last 4 words.


      May 4, 2013 at 10:43 am

  2. Like x 2. “one I stole” Ah, a true concern.

    Jamie Dedes

    May 12, 2013 at 1:59 am

    • Thanks. Yes, it’s hard to pay close enough attention to one’s present to be sure it’s real, not wished-for.


      May 13, 2013 at 3:14 pm

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