Celebrating a Year

week 216 ~ a bigger world

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a bigger world
than we perceived
the stars are hurled

as life is whirled
dreams preconceived
a bigger world

troubles unfurled
still unrelieved
the stars are hurled

our plans untwirled
we who believed
a bigger world

watch colors swirled
heroes deceived
the stars are hurled

hands tightly curled
potential grieved
a bigger world
the stars are hurled

Written by mairmusic

December 14, 2012 at 12:24 am

Posted in November, villanelle

Tagged with , , ,

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  1. Love the poem.


    December 14, 2012 at 1:12 pm

    • Thanks– directly out of the jumble of my life that week.


      December 14, 2012 at 1:33 pm

  2. Dreams preconceived!
    I love this.

    Jamie Dedes

    December 18, 2012 at 7:03 am

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