Celebrating a Year

week 208 ~ what’s fixed always will be broken

with 24 comments

what’s fixed always will be broken
and what’s now new will soon get old
and where the time goes no one’s told
me I guess some things aren’t spoken
of down the rabbit hole again
my friend and who knows where we’ll land
this time stick your head in the sand
but the days march on relentless
you ask and if I had to guess
I’d say entropy will expand

 

entropy: the degree of disorder or uncertainty in a system

Written by mairmusic

October 3, 2012 at 12:06 pm

Posted in decima, October

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24 Responses

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  1. Ah…the poem reminds me of a discussion I had not too long ago with my friend…we concluded that entropy will expand also.

    slpmartin

    October 3, 2012 at 12:55 pm

  2. words of wisdom or close observation here,
    glad to read.

    :)

    Yielday Pittzheng

    October 3, 2012 at 2:33 pm

  3. What’s fixed will become “was once broken”. Though might not be as good as new – that’s imperfect – but life is never perfect in the first place. The mistakes and lessons learnt are what makes life colourful and this signifies growth in us. I enjoyed the uncertainty and disorder in the system. Keep it up!

    Die Reise meines Leben

    October 3, 2012 at 3:19 pm

  4. Splendid write. As always your poetry always shine through. Good to read you again.

    Cheers!

    Emmanuel Ibok

    October 3, 2012 at 3:40 pm

    • Thanks, Emmanuel– will be over when the spinning stops to read you.

      mairmusic

      October 20, 2012 at 7:10 pm

  5. Inevitable maybe, is entropy, but we can make some fine words with it, like you do here!

    mbwilliams

    October 3, 2012 at 5:43 pm

  6. Rather interesting work, short and concise. Wonderfully written!

    systematicweasel

    October 4, 2012 at 9:31 am

  7. very sense making headline.

    Mish Foster

    October 4, 2012 at 2:19 pm

  8. I loved this piece … unique !!!

    Green Speck

    October 5, 2012 at 5:39 am

  9. powerful talent.

    Bristo Jiu

    October 5, 2012 at 1:11 pm

  10. so very true!

    Sharmishtha Basu

    October 11, 2012 at 2:49 am

  11. Reblogged this on INTO THE BARDO and commented:
    Mandolinist, composer, educator and writer Marilynn Mair, posts a poem on her blog once a week. It’s always a treat: sonnet, villanelle, decima, rondeau, or pantoum … It’s an event I look forward to. This one is from her 208th week of blogging. Jamie Dedes

    • Thanks, Jamie! The poem formatting seems to have disappeared though– could you fix that?

      mairmusic

      October 22, 2012 at 7:56 am

      • No. They have to click through to see the correct formating. Reblogging doesn’t allow for it. Sorry … There have been a number of click through those, judging by the stats.

        Thanks for a fabujous poem.

      • Thanks for the re-blog!

        mairmusic

        October 29, 2012 at 7:23 pm


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