Celebrating a Year

week 105 ~ the moon laughs like a great

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the moon laughs like a great
fat buddha in the sky
now let me get this straight
the moon laughs like a great
joke has been told but wait
October raindrops cry
the moon laughs like a great
fat buddha in the sky

Written by mairmusic

October 21, 2010 at 7:08 pm

Posted in October, rondeau

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  3. October raindrops cry
    the moon laughs like a great
    fat buddah in the sky

    you make me smile…
    love these lines.

    Jingle

    October 21, 2010 at 7:35 pm

  4. keep rocking,
    thanks for sharing…

    support by visiting as many poets as possible.
    enjoy some fresh poets this week.

    Jingle

    October 21, 2010 at 7:36 pm

  5. Oh the October moon cries because summer is over and winter will soon be here…enjoyed your post.

    slpmartin

    October 21, 2010 at 8:09 pm

  6. Beautiful family photo!

    Carol Ann Hoel

    October 21, 2010 at 10:34 pm

  7. Love October…right as Autumn slips right over us and takes us captive.

    suzicate

    October 21, 2010 at 11:23 pm

    • Yes, it has the beauty of the leaves without September’s nostalgia for summer.

      mairmusic

      October 22, 2010 at 10:26 am

  8. Excellent. I love the bit of everyday language in this.

    PattiKen

    October 21, 2010 at 11:53 pm

  9. Oh, and wonderful picture too.

    PattiKen

    October 21, 2010 at 11:53 pm

  10. Nice, had me smile for a bit!

    Scent of my heart

    October 22, 2010 at 12:19 am

  11. Really thought the form worked well in the context of the question/answer nature of the poem. The stop and start implied by using ‘wait’ helps clarify the narrators context considerably. Thanks for posting through Thursday Poetry Rally, dug your poem.

    crb.

    Caribbean Fool

    October 22, 2010 at 12:55 am

  12. The moon laughs and so do I. What a lovely, joyous thought you bring to us with this poem. I can see it in my minds eye again and again and it makes me smile. Even October’s tears cannot stop my smile. Who knows? Maybe October’s tears are tears of joy. Peace, Sharie

    spiritteacher

    October 22, 2010 at 7:39 am

    • A lovely thought, that. I was simply thinking of our October full moon and the drizzly chilly rain of the day.

      mairmusic

      October 22, 2010 at 10:23 am

  13. cute one. the very thought of laughing buddha brings a smile on my lips.

    trisha

    October 22, 2010 at 9:39 am

  14. Happy man.. wonderfully written poem..

    An Ode to Friendship

    Happy Rally

    –Someone Is Special–

    Someone Is Special

    October 22, 2010 at 10:42 am

  15. The moon certainly laughs while people may cry
    I want to see that laugh but can’t because its day

    I thought it up after I read yours ;)

    My entry for week 31
    http://hindawy.wordpress.com/2010/10/20/the-other-side-of-the-sun/

    hindawy

    October 22, 2010 at 10:48 am

  16. yes, the full moon was evident even in the evening today– so clear and cheerful in the sky.

    mairmusic

    October 22, 2010 at 10:52 am

  17. wow, this made me laugh. funny poetry is beyond me. i’m impressed.

    Marit

    October 22, 2010 at 1:09 pm

  18. gorgeous little piece.

    good thing Buddha loves rain and laughter.

    boababpapers

    October 22, 2010 at 1:58 pm

  19. Loved the part about the laughing Budda!! Great write as always Ms M …hugs xx

    buttercup600

    October 22, 2010 at 8:07 pm

  20. Excellent rondeau…love the images as well.

    liv2write2day

    October 22, 2010 at 8:25 pm

  21. this is so refreshing, marilynn. your reference to the moon made me smile. :)

    PinkLady

    October 22, 2010 at 10:50 pm

    • your photo radiates happiness and brightness. :)

      PinkLady

      October 22, 2010 at 10:51 pm

      • Thanks– it was so great to have family visit!

        mairmusic

        October 23, 2010 at 8:09 am

    • A burst of funny happiness from my soul. decided to work more on the thorny dark poem on my desktop because it didn’t fit the picture at all!

      mairmusic

      October 23, 2010 at 8:10 am

  22. that moon forgot to fall down in this october sky =]

    i like this. it’s like a treat for me on this month of october =]

    -kyogakura

    kyoichi

    October 22, 2010 at 11:19 pm

    • Yes, it’s high in the sky & s fat as it can be! Thanks for reading!

      mairmusic

      October 23, 2010 at 8:08 am

  23. short awesome poem is both short and awesome thank you =]

    luisydomonique

    October 23, 2010 at 2:34 am

  24. Great Rondeau! you did a fine job!

    2zpoint

    October 23, 2010 at 11:52 pm

  25. This rondeau form is fascinating. Thank you for posting this. I love how the moon is like a fat laughing buddha. Smiling and detached, but always watching.

    jgrow2

    October 24, 2010 at 1:50 pm

    • Yes it is– thanks for the fun comment! Do you have a page I could visit?

      mairmusic

      October 24, 2010 at 2:56 pm

  26. I now have a picture in my head of the Buddha laughing at me from the night sky. Your poem is short and simple, but the words create such detailed imagery in the mind. :)

    The Reason You Come

    October 25, 2010 at 12:34 am

  27. love the image of a Great Fat Buddha in the sky….I will look at the Full Moon that way from now on….enjoyed this very much…bkm

    signed .............bkm

    October 25, 2010 at 12:57 pm

  28. hope you well,

    simply checking on everyone.
    return favors to those NEW to you but come here. we have a few fresh poets, we don’t want to discourage them when they jump out and do the visiting…

    u rock.
    thanks for the long time participation..

    xxx

    Jingle

    October 26, 2010 at 11:42 am

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