Celebrating a Year

August 10, 2010

with 25 comments

heart full of wonder
which way lies dreaming
clouds pull me under
heart full of wonder
what time will thunder
send the rains teeming
heart full of wonder
which way lies dreaming

Written by mairmusic

August 11, 2010 at 10:36 am

25 Responses

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  1. that was such a heart full piece..thanks for sharing with One Shot..cheers Pete

    pete marshall

    August 11, 2010 at 12:45 pm

    • Thanks Pete– pun and all!


      August 11, 2010 at 12:51 pm

  2. clouds full me under…that plays well with the which way is dreaming…i do like the rain though…smiles. happy one shot!


    August 11, 2010 at 2:18 pm

    • thanks for reading!


      August 11, 2010 at 3:18 pm

  3. This was lovely! All of these make me wonder – clouds, thunder, rains, dreams…
    So simply and beautifully put… it was childlike – the innocence in this poem.. . It added to the charm…

    I have some lovely August Awards for you… please feel free to accept as many as you like, and if you like…


    August 11, 2010 at 2:31 pm

    • Aren’t you sweet! I will hustle right over to your page :-)


      August 11, 2010 at 3:19 pm

  4. These symbols – so universal – wonder and dreaming. Isn’t that the inspiration for poets, keeping it fresh, stretching our imaginations? I enjoyed this. Good read. Thank you.

    Gay Cannon

    August 11, 2010 at 3:45 pm

    • Thanks for reading! I do love the little rondeau for a brief reflection! I read your poem, but couldn’t leave a comment without joining… sorry…


      August 11, 2010 at 3:57 pm

  5. Like how you follow the word wonder with questioning words in the following lines, cool effect when the lines merge seemlessly (if read without pause). Reads very well line by line too. Applaud your use of form. cheers


    August 11, 2010 at 4:56 pm

    • Thanks, Adam! I’ve got a new form to unleash tomorrow, so check back!


      August 11, 2010 at 6:26 pm

  6. There was a wonderful sweetness and innocence in reading this…I so enjoyed it…I am sorry for my absence lately, have had deadlines in my job and hardly any time here but am catching up again. Sending you loads of love gorgeous lady xx


    August 11, 2010 at 6:13 pm

    • Always a delight to find you here! No apologies ever needed– things have their own flow.


      August 11, 2010 at 6:28 pm

  7. I love how you can use so many different styles of poetry MM.
    “Heart full of wonder” I like this simple almost child-like phrase that grows with each repetition


    August 11, 2010 at 10:20 pm

    • Thanks! It is the simplicity I long for. :-)


      August 11, 2010 at 11:04 pm

  8. I love the flow of this piece, with the repetitive heart full of wonder…just so nice to read, very melodic. :) Heartspell


    August 11, 2010 at 10:32 pm

    • Thanks for reading! The rondeau is actually a musical form as well.


      August 11, 2010 at 11:05 pm

  9. your talent really shines…
    I love your sweetness in nature.


    August 11, 2010 at 10:51 pm

  10. Yes, musical … :-) Perfect poem, perfect photo.

    Jamie Dedes

    August 12, 2010 at 11:14 am

    • thanks– it’s simple but real in feeling–and I’m glad it worked for you.


      August 12, 2010 at 11:19 am

  11. Lyrical and fun, this poem is a wonderful read :) I like the technical side of it too…I always learn something here from great poet. Thank You.


    August 13, 2010 at 1:26 am

    • You should try the rondeau– it’s a fun form!


      August 13, 2010 at 7:38 am

  12. M. it’s just like a little tea sandwich. a small little bite you enjoy for a long time. very sweet post.

    Doni Cifra

    August 13, 2010 at 7:35 am

    • great analogy! thanks for reading!


      August 13, 2010 at 7:37 am

  13. i just love the playfulness of these poems. your talent is in one word “fantastic”.


    September 23, 2010 at 10:29 am

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