Celebrating a Year

week 86 ~ I’ve got all the world’s dreams inside of me

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I’ve got all the world’s dreams inside of me
I knock on the door fortune lets me in
blue skies ahead as far as I can see
I’ve got all the world’s dreams inside of me
and my affinity for entropy
somehow seems to rig the deck so I win
I’ve got all the world’s dreams inside of me
I knock on the door fortune lets me in

Written by mairmusic

June 9, 2010 at 6:43 pm

Posted in June, rondeau

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34 Responses

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  1. very confident and funny you,
    your poem shows your love for life.
    May all of your dreams come true!
    Happy Thursday!
    ;)

    Jingle

    June 9, 2010 at 7:22 pm

    • Happy Rally for sure!

      mairmusic

      June 9, 2010 at 7:36 pm

  2. let the dreams come forth and become reality…

    brian

    June 9, 2010 at 9:08 pm

    • do I sound like someone who sees the end of a major project in sight?

      mairmusic

      June 10, 2010 at 8:34 am

  3. this is lovely with all the joy of good fortune and blue skies — it transfers all that happiness right into my world….
    thank you ….bkm

    soulintention: signed .............bkm

    June 9, 2010 at 9:28 pm

    • You are welcome to it– I’m always sorry to transfer my sorrow in poems, but joy is another matter!

      mairmusic

      June 10, 2010 at 8:35 am

  4. your glowing face says the same. :)

    trisha

    June 10, 2010 at 7:56 am

    • I am almost finished a huge project, and the line from Pessoa just jumped out at me.

      mairmusic

      June 10, 2010 at 8:36 am

  5. Happy poem, I like it :)

    theonlycin

    June 10, 2010 at 8:39 am

    • Simple, happy– that’s me right now.

      mairmusic

      June 10, 2010 at 8:43 am

  6. this is truly inspiring! i love your enthusiasm in life =)

    PinkLady

    June 10, 2010 at 11:23 am

    • Thanks– I’m in a good place right now!

      mairmusic

      June 10, 2010 at 12:37 pm

  7. Nice musical and dreamlike quality to your words. Another enjoyable poem :)

    adam

    June 10, 2010 at 2:55 pm

  8. Great poem! I like the echoes of folk songs. Thanks!

    Morganna

    June 10, 2010 at 4:16 pm

    • I hadn’t thought of that, but you’re right!

      mairmusic

      June 10, 2010 at 4:37 pm

  9. and my affinity for entropy
    somehow seems to rig the deck so I win

    Nice.

    Rhyme on!

    Tim Keeton
    (Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-tales

    Tim Keeton

    June 10, 2010 at 4:19 pm

    • Thanks– that’s the one dark humor bit in the whole happy-thing, figures you’s gravitate to it ;-)

      mairmusic

      June 10, 2010 at 4:38 pm

  10. i love the motivation and enthusiasm contained in this poem…The smile in the picture is great, really shows “you got all the world’s dream inside of you”

    Nice work and thanks for being there…Cheers!

    Emmanuel Ibok

    June 11, 2010 at 2:47 am

    • I should finish the book today– it’s an– I-can-see-the-finish-line smile :-)

      mairmusic

      June 11, 2010 at 7:47 am

  11. Yes, the world’sdreams are inside us and we just need to knock, thanks for the reminder. How often we forget.

    suzicate

    June 12, 2010 at 8:57 pm

  12. This is really great – I love your wording!

    adkwriter15

    June 12, 2010 at 9:11 pm

    • Thanks– a happy simple poem for a change :-)

      mairmusic

      June 12, 2010 at 9:17 pm

  13. what a positive message, I love good dreams, especially when they come true! thanks, alan

    ncbeachcomber_asa

    June 16, 2010 at 1:57 pm

    • thank YOU for reading!

      mairmusic

      June 16, 2010 at 2:14 pm

  14. cute and self contained haha! nice..

    fiveloaf

    June 16, 2010 at 10:27 pm

    • just a happy little rondeau

      mairmusic

      June 16, 2010 at 11:21 pm

  15. awww what a lovely poem :D

    liked it a lot.

    my link :

    http://writtenverse.blogspot.com/

    http://harshikaram.wordpress.com/

    dancingfreak

    June 17, 2010 at 1:44 am

    • Thanks– I’ll visit & let you know when I’ve got mine up for this week.

      mairmusic

      June 17, 2010 at 7:53 am

  16. I’m so glad I found your blog. Not only are the poems neat, but they’re an education in form!

    robot cupcake poetry

    June 22, 2010 at 12:24 pm

    • Thanks! I am an educator by profession (in music) & inclination.

      mairmusic

      June 22, 2010 at 12:50 pm

  17. I so feel like you do.

    Trisha

    September 25, 2010 at 3:43 am


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