Celebrating a Year

week 65 ~ I’m sorry the devil’s busy

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I’m sorry the devil’s busy
please wait someone will assist you
look around he’s not here is he
I’m sorry the devil’s busy
it won’t help to have a hissy
fit there’s nothing we can do
I’m sorry the devil’s busy
please wait someone will assist you

Written by mairmusic

January 18, 2010 at 4:22 pm

Posted in January, rondeau

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  1. haha…not sure i want to wait…or how they will assist me…nicely played one shot!

    brian

    October 6, 2010 at 7:19 pm

  2. Nice. Light, but fun and I like the rhythm.

    Ben Langhinrichs

    October 6, 2010 at 9:35 pm

  3. You bring new forms to me every week. This one was really fun to read.

    Patti

    October 6, 2010 at 11:03 pm

  4. brilliant piece. just loved it. writing rondeau seems really tough game. may be i will try later, but right now i dont dare.

    love.

    trisha

    October 8, 2010 at 9:23 am

    • Actually it isn’t at all hard. You can take any sentence, split it in half and off you go. This one started w/ someone’s T-shirt I saw in a bar!

      mairmusic

      October 8, 2010 at 11:01 am

  5. You wrote a poem about my ex-wife. Thanks.

    Seriously, or at least, only half-kidding, though – fun work, with deeper implications, if one’s mind tends toward those inclinations.

    Steve Isaak

    October 8, 2010 at 4:50 pm


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