week 1 ~ a simple transference of radiance
a simple transference of radiance
at the moment the sun hits the water
before it’s extinguished light together
with reflection a golden circumstance
that we await wine glasses held ready
to salute and in that instant we are
giddy with twilight the ocean calls our
names watching waiting darkness descend we
head indoors light within us laughing at
our good fortune to be here friends away
from all that is uncertain morning may
overwrite this feeling but we know that
for now we are strongly simply happy
and everything is just as it should be
the title said it all :) I enjoyed your sonnet, as usual. Happy potluck!
how light can transfer inwards, nature’s impact on us etc…good alliterations as well
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/06/29/everlasting-tempo/
Life: Between the lines
July 3, 2011 at 10:40 pm
This is the one that started the whole blog! About my birthday celebration w/ friends, 2008.
mairmusic
July 4, 2011 at 10:50 am
Lovely visuals, good work :)
Jeanie McBain
July 4, 2011 at 4:02 pm
Thanks– glad you could visit.
mairmusic
July 5, 2011 at 10:08 am
I like it! And thanks for sharing the beginning with those of us who began reading later. :)
lizbethsgarden
July 4, 2011 at 10:02 pm
It was so long ago– hard to imagine life pre-blog!
mairmusic
July 5, 2011 at 10:07 am
love the imagery.
Jingle
July 5, 2011 at 12:12 am
thanks. Jingle!
mairmusic
July 5, 2011 at 10:06 am
I love your power to capture moments, your poems are so alive and fresh
mindlovemisery
July 5, 2011 at 2:39 am
Ah, thanks– that was my purpose w/ the blog– to be present in the moment, in the day.
mairmusic
July 5, 2011 at 10:06 am
Beautiful! I could almost hear nervous laughter as I read. It was almost as if I slipped into the room where they were. Excellent job!
charlesmashburn
July 5, 2011 at 2:34 pm
Thanks– the joy of friends is so tangible…
mairmusic
July 6, 2011 at 8:57 pm
to friends. cheers
luna15
July 5, 2011 at 3:06 pm
absolutely!
mairmusic
July 6, 2011 at 8:53 pm