week 185 ~ pieces of the puzzle

pieces of the puzzle
scattered now forever
drift beyond meaningful

responding to the pull
of my heart I sever
pieces of the puzzle
to fight would be futile

as I watch another
drift beyond meaningful
existence while chattel
I can’t reconfigure
pieces of the puzzle
that aren’t mine but equal
parts without an answer
drift beyond meaningful

love has paid the devil
far too much and bitter
pieces of the puzzle
drift beyond meaningful

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Written by mairmusic

April 26, 2012 at 11:22 pm

Posted in April, villanelle

Tagged with devil, loss, love, poetry, puzzle

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a puzzle like that should be swept aside. may be with time it will become meaningful or else it should be allowed to sleep.

whats the use if it becomes over elusive.

Sharmishtha

April 27, 2012 at 4:39 am

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- you are right. time has gone.
  
  mairmusic
  
  April 27, 2012 at 8:09 am
  
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  - when your heart says its over you should move on- thats my policy.
    
    Sharmishtha
    
    May 2, 2012 at 3:55 am
We seem to want to give meaning to everything…but I think not all things have meaning…they are random events which follow no logical pattern to fit into a puzzle…oh just a random thought brought on by your poem.

slpmartin

April 27, 2012 at 12:02 pm

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- interesting comment, my friend. trying to suss all that out now myself.
  
  mairmusic
  
  April 27, 2012 at 12:07 pm
  
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  - i agree with charles a lot, i have seen this from personal experiences.
    
    Sharmishtha Basu
    
    April 29, 2012 at 2:28 pm
ugh that last stanza is a heart wringer….some puzzle pieces fit, some dont and some days it seems someone has poured several puzzles into the same box…sorry your metaphor sent my mind spinning…good.

brian miller

May 2, 2012 at 12:32 pm

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- and an interesting spin, my friend.
  
  mairmusic
  
  May 2, 2012 at 2:09 pm
  
  Reply

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What’s a sonnet?

A sonnet is a 14-line iambic pentameter poem with a unique and characteristic rhyme scheme. They have been written in Europe and England for centuries, and usually combine viewpoint and reflection in a personal yet universal way. I call mine blank-verse sonnets and try for a simple casual scan that observes yet obscures the form. Inspirations are the American sonnets of e. e. cummings and Edna "Vince" Millay.

What’s a villanelle?

A villanelle is an early French form with 19 lines using only 2 rhymes, traditionally broken into 6 verses. It's kind of obsessive, with lines 1 & 3 repeating alternately, the 4th time as lines 18 & 19. The lines can be any length, but don't seem to vary within a poem, and subjects include love, loss and challenge. Dylan Thomas, Elizabeth Bishop and Sylvia Plath all wrote them, and from the minute I typed villanelle in "Year 2 begins" I was itching to try it out because I've never written one. My first appear in Weeks 53 & 56. I've run some verses together, as many modern writers have done, for continuity and a cleaner line.

What’s a rondeau?

A rondeau is a form of medieval poetry that pre-dates the villanelle and also uses only 2 rhymes. The earliest come from an 8-line song form with 2 lines of music that repeat-- line 1 as 4 & 7, and line 2 as 8, rhyming the rest in a characteristic pattern. The result is a sturdy little poem that makes its point thoughtfully, and less obsessively than the villanelle, perhaps because the generating couplet is unrhymed, and the lines don't need to be the same length, just able to be sung or spoken in the same amount of time. The first ones appear in weeks 55 & 57. Sometimes the poetic form, sans music, is called a triolet.

What’s a decima?

A decima is an early 10-line Spanish poetic form, with a distinct break after the first 4. It uses an 8-syllable line and has an unusual but characteristic rhyme scheme. It's also a 19th-century form of improvised Cuban song so I thought it would work well in this blog format. My first appear in weeks 66 & 69.

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A Malaysian form from the 15th century-- how exotic! It's a series of quatrains, w/ lines 2 & 4 repeating as lines 1 & 3 in the next. The last quatrain also uses lines 1 & 3 from the first quatrain, with the first line ending the poem. So every line is used twice. My first one is week 95.

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