week 171 ~ I shake the snow globe a cyclone

I shake the snow globe a cyclone
of light whirls past and easily
falls my dreams enveloping me
in a cloak I will never own
but sometimes wear reasons unknown
anyone could see me if they’d
look but they don’t a pact I’ve made
with fate giving me time away
from scrutiny so here I stay
hoping the future’s been mislaid

Written by mairmusic

January 20, 2012 at 4:43 pm

Posted in decima, January

Tagged with poetry

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we are invisible
we walk in plain sight
yet
eyes can only see
what they’ve decided
is real
and
what is real
is undecided

Oh something your fine poem engendered. :-)

slpmartin

January 20, 2012 at 5:28 pm

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- Brilliant, my friend– I love it!
  
  mairmusic
  
  January 20, 2012 at 5:40 pm
  
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This is amazing! … so pure… it drew me in and captured my emotions… I literally have goosebumps…

simply beautiful!
~L

~L

January 20, 2012 at 5:43 pm

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- excellent! thanks for letting m know.
  
  mairmusic
  
  January 20, 2012 at 6:54 pm
  
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Beautifully put, and so true.

http://halfwaybetweenthegutter.wordpress.com/2012/01/22/painfully-breaking/

halfwaybetweenthegutter

January 24, 2012 at 2:11 pm

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- thanks!
  
  mairmusic
  
  January 24, 2012 at 8:33 pm
  
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Change is sometimes unwelcome and yet, inevitable. Lovely writing.

Daydreamertoo

January 24, 2012 at 9:01 pm

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- Or welcome and evitable…? one never knows…
  
  mairmusic
  
  January 28, 2012 at 6:46 pm
  
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I love your first line. A poem full of wants, wishes, dreams and reality as well. I like this: “Enveloping me in a cloak I will never own” and “anyone could see me if they’d look.”

Anne Katherine

January 24, 2012 at 10:50 pm

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- yes, it is all that– thanks for the comment!
  
  mairmusic
  
  January 28, 2012 at 6:44 pm
  
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i hope that along the way a few of the dreams stitched in that cloak are found…i like charles play on yours as well..sometimes it is not so bad to be invisible…

brian

January 24, 2012 at 11:27 pm

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- True– it gives breathing room.
  
  mairmusic
  
  January 28, 2012 at 6:39 pm
  
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Nice write :) I’m thinking about shaking my own snowglobe and seeing what happens…

bajanpoet

January 25, 2012 at 3:32 pm

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- Judging by your website– alot!
  
  mairmusic
  
  January 28, 2012 at 6:38 pm
  
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I am one to hide away as well. Lovely poem!

Sheila

January 25, 2012 at 3:54 pm

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- Thanks– enjoyed visiting your site as well.
  
  mairmusic
  
  January 28, 2012 at 6:36 pm
  
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love your title,

amazing entry,

Happy Thursday.

Taylor

January 26, 2012 at 4:31 pm

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- Glad it resonated with you.
  
  mairmusic
  
  January 28, 2012 at 6:31 pm
  
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Lovely poem :)

cinnamon blues

January 28, 2012 at 11:18 am

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- thanks…
  
  mairmusic
  
  January 28, 2012 at 6:31 pm
  
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authentic and lovely words, well done.

Summer Rain

January 28, 2012 at 2:54 pm

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- Thanks!!
  
  mairmusic
  
  January 28, 2012 at 6:27 pm
  
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wow, what an enjoyable poem!and a real delight to recite. thanks for share :)

yelena

January 29, 2012 at 7:25 pm

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- thank YOU for your nice comment!
  
  mairmusic
  
  January 30, 2012 at 12:27 am
  
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Love this. This flows well and I love the new thoughts beginning in the middle of a line – it’s like you’ve shaken a snow globe and I have to concentrate to make out the image. Great write!

muzzleflashing

January 30, 2012 at 11:59 pm

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- and v.cool comment my friend!
  
  mairmusic
  
  January 31, 2012 at 12:46 am
  
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Who am I?

A mandolinist, a bandolimist, a writer, a photographer, a wannabe Brasileira. Check my webpage for information on my music and my sometimes life in Rio.

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I have made a plan for this year, beginning on my birthday- October 16, 2008 - to keep creativity in focus in my daily life, spontaneously, reflectively, and with intention, by setting in motion several series of small events. Every day I will take a photo and record a thought. Every week I will write a sonnet and photograph myself in the context of my life. And I will post it all here. Maybe not every day, but I will maintain the schedule of each series and post as often as I can. I think this will be fun, may be interesting, and will result in a considered year of small moments stolen from a busy life and strung together to make... who knows? At this point it's just a plan. Wish me luck~ here goes!

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I have completed a year of this blog-- amazing! And I've decided to continue on, because this document has become a treasured reflective spot in my life. There will be some changes for "Year 2," beginning on my birthday, October 16, 2009. I'll expand the options for my weekly poem beyond sonnet to add some other forms-- rondeau or triolet, possibly villanelle. I just added the decima in late January. And in August I am adding the pantoum. Definitions will appear below as the forms enter this page. I'll continue to post a photo daily, but I may post several pictures taken on one day over the course of a week if I have an interesting series. I may even post an old photo if I'm writing about something I'm thinking back to. I'll continue to have fun with this project & I hope you will too. Thanks for reading!

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For Year 3 I tried some changes, including other people in the self-portraits that accompany my poems, adding "Musical Sundays" to post mp3s of my music, but these petered out in a few months. This is simply a place for my daily thoughts & photos, and weekly poems in the forms I love. Onward...!

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What’s a sonnet?

A sonnet is a 14-line iambic pentameter poem with a unique and characteristic rhyme scheme. They have been written in Europe and England for centuries, and usually combine viewpoint and reflection in a personal yet universal way. I call mine blank-verse sonnets and try for a simple casual scan that observes yet obscures the form. Inspirations are the American sonnets of e. e. cummings and Edna "Vince" Millay.

What’s a villanelle?

A villanelle is an early French form with 19 lines using only 2 rhymes, traditionally broken into 6 verses. It's kind of obsessive, with lines 1 & 3 repeating alternately, the 4th time as lines 18 & 19. The lines can be any length, but don't seem to vary within a poem, and subjects include love, loss and challenge. Dylan Thomas, Elizabeth Bishop and Sylvia Plath all wrote them, and from the minute I typed villanelle in "Year 2 begins" I was itching to try it out because I've never written one. My first appear in Weeks 53 & 56. I've run some verses together, as many modern writers have done, for continuity and a cleaner line.

What’s a rondeau?

A rondeau is a form of medieval poetry that pre-dates the villanelle and also uses only 2 rhymes. The earliest come from an 8-line song form with 2 lines of music that repeat-- line 1 as 4 & 7, and line 2 as 8, rhyming the rest in a characteristic pattern. The result is a sturdy little poem that makes its point thoughtfully, and less obsessively than the villanelle, perhaps because the generating couplet is unrhymed, and the lines don't need to be the same length, just able to be sung or spoken in the same amount of time. The first ones appear in weeks 55 & 57. Sometimes the poetic form, sans music, is called a triolet.

What’s a decima?

A decima is an early 10-line Spanish poetic form, with a distinct break after the first 4. It uses an 8-syllable line and has an unusual but characteristic rhyme scheme. It's also a 19th-century form of improvised Cuban song so I thought it would work well in this blog format. My first appear in weeks 66 & 69.

What’s a pantoum?

A Malaysian form from the 15th century-- how exotic! It's a series of quatrains, w/ lines 2 & 4 repeating as lines 1 & 3 in the next. The last quatrain also uses lines 1 & 3 from the first quatrain, with the first line ending the poem. So every line is used twice. My first one is week 95.

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